Current date/time is Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:51 pm
Topic review
Tears in Time
by 747 Col. Moonlight on Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:14 am
Ok, some from MG know I am making a story. As I write chapters I need 2nd hand critique. Italics = Future Lucy, regular print is the story. I am accepting ideas as well. I am up to chapter 8, however I will only post so much.
Prologue - Beginning of the End.
You can say I was running away. What else could I do? You probably won’t realize what I mean until later, but that can wait. I tried my best, but you know how stories work. I did my best filling out my journal. And this is where it ends. As I try to escape, the only glimmer of hope was this. I could tell you now, but that wouldn’t express what it meant.
Again, I accept ANYTHING beneficial of course.
GAHGSAHGLDSFG;AJDFGD;AS
I accidentally deleted my entire save file.... back to chapter one...
Prologue - Beginning of the End.
You can say I was running away. What else could I do? You probably won’t realize what I mean until later, but that can wait. I tried my best, but you know how stories work. I did my best filling out my journal. And this is where it ends. As I try to escape, the only glimmer of hope was this. I could tell you now, but that wouldn’t express what it meant.
Again, I accept ANYTHING beneficial of course.
GAHGSAHGLDSFG;AJDFGD;AS
I accidentally deleted my entire save file.... back to chapter one...