http://elite-legion.forumotion.net/stories-f6/-t1.htm literature,comics,anything writtin is allowed. Sun, 14 Sep 2008 01:14:19 GMT 10 http://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif http://elite-legion.forumotion.net/stories-f6/-t1.htm http://elite-legion.forumotion.net/stories-f6/tears-in-time-t13.htm 747 Col. Moonlight Ok, some from MG know I am making a story. As I write chapters I need 2nd hand critique. Italics = Future Lucy, regular print is the story. I am accepting ideas as well. I am up to chapter 8, however I will only post so much. Prologue - Beginning of the End. You can say I was running away. What else could I do? You probably won’t realize what I mean until later, but that can wait. I tried my best, but you know how stories work. I did my best filling out my journal. And this ... Stories Sun, 14 Sep 2008 01:14:19 GMT http://elite-legion.forumotion.net/stories-f6/tears-in-time-t13.htm#91 http://elite-legion.forumotion.net/stories-f6/tears-in-time-t13.htm